The line compares the percentage of the residents in the age between 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three nations namely Japan,Sweden and USA.
Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend for three different countries, whereas Jpan had a significant rise.
In 1940,the population aged 65 and over in USA was around 8% which was the largest proportion. The percentage of residents in Sweden was lower, with about 6%, compared to Japan, with just 5%. The proportion of the population aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan peaked in 1980, at approximately 15%, 13% and 3% respectively
In 2040, it is predicted that the proportion of Japn will rise rapidly, with over 25%, compared to the percentage of Sweden and USA, with around 25% and 23% respectively
- The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 39
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sweden
...40 to 2040 in three nations namely Japan,Sweden and USA. Overall, it is clear that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76445954543 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3756181936 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191246566805 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110387140131 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666362287496 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122016096189 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528593344725 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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