The reading and lecture both are discussed about agnostids behaved and they are arthropod relatives of modern day insects. While the reading discussed in favor of the topic are they relatives of arthropod and provides three different theories to support this topic. However, the lecture refutes this points that make reading and she states that this theories are weaken to prove that agnostide are relatives of arthropod.
Firstly, the reading claims that agonostide are free swim predators who hunted smaller animals. Reading also stats that arthropod are very strong swimmers and active predators and agnostide are small almost six millimeters but lots of smaller organism are aveilable in ancient occan. However, the lecture says that swimming predators have strong vision but in the case of agnostids their vision not well developed and sometime they are blind. So this theories are not worked.
In addition, the reading make the argument that agnostids are seafloor dwellers Where other primitive arthropods live his way. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that seafloor dwellers are slow moving and their geographical location is very small, but agnostids are fast moving animals and their geographical area are very large.
Finally, the reading passage claims that agnostide may be a parasites who live on larger organisms. the author think that agnostide live on fish and other arthropods. The lecture refutes this point by saying that parasites population are live very few number because living organisms are always eat them. But in the case of agnostide they are live large number population. That defined that agnostide are not a parasites.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed that agnostide are not a parasites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36742424242 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48396776243 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.88610958 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422960274885 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167381103028 0.0996497079465 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657402045008 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256711339017 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044937314515 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.