Animals are used by humans for profit in many ways. However, some people don’t agree with this use of animals. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
There is little room for doubt that humanity is endeavoring to make profits in every single area. Even animals are being used to create financial prosperity. Many people are convinced that animals’ involvement in the process of making a profit is not reasonable. This essay will elaborate on ways how people are taking advantage of animals and reasons why I contend the idea deeming those actions as not acceptable.
While doing justice to the major areas where existence of animals enables people to create prosperity, one should not block out stance of animals in industry. Obviously, animals...
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