Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Life quality is one of the important parameters that human kind wants to increse it day by day. Humans are naturaly lasy and they want to make it easier by developing science and technology. So in my view Life today is easier and more comforatble than several decades ago.I think two important reason have major effect on increasing lif quality.
The main reason is that nowdays we can earn money easier than our grandparents. SO we don't need to do hard works to earn money and as a results our life is more comfortable. For example, I heared from my father that my grandfather was a traveler and he didn't have a stationary job. He was at out of country for several years without any visiting his family because there were no suitablr job in his hometown. he suffered a lot of difficulties during his life. But my father and also me have job in our hometown becuase of new technologies that our country has. our life condition in more comforatble than my grandfather because we have easier job in hometown and we are aside our family every day. As you can see, today's life quality is higher than few decades ago.
Another reason is that people nowdays have easier access to medicine and also they live in high quality houses. Living in a condition that you will cure easily with developed hospitals and medical science increses the quality of life. A documentary which I whatched few yers ago is a proof of this reson. The documentary was about developing of medical science and its effect on life span of people. Based on doucumentary life span of people has increased about 20 percent in last decades because of development in medical science. The doucumentry indicated that a lot of infancies were dying until few decades ago because of contagious diseases but now we vaccintae children to protect them from various health problems. This documentry taught me that our comfortable life condition is a reslut of developing of technologies on medicine.
In some even thogh alot of people around the world are living in a hard conditions, generally life today is easier in comparsion to our grandparents time. The main reasons which improved our life condition are easier ways to earn money and develpment in medical science. However, I think next generations will have easier life because of day by day development of technolgies which provide healthier an easier apportunity for life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, i think, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81265206813 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71529794435 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484184914842 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2746422078 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1904761905 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267177384213 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786773472747 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495004009846 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16482082028 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252472030505 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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