Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Ana on Thu, 05/09/2013 - 21:28

I believe, improved technology has already changed the way people live, today. Microwave, oven, and refrigerator have taken a very important place in every kitchen. Nowadays, we hardly can see kitchen without these devices. These help us to save our time and energy, so people can concentrate on the other important things rather cooking. In early days, women used to spend whole day in the kitchen. However, today’s women can easily play various roles, as a wife, a mother, and a working woman with the help of these devices.

First, there is a saying that, “Time is money” and it’s true...

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Sentence: Traffic and pollution already kill our half of the energy, and by the time we rich home from work or college, we are totally exhausted.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to we and rich

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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40

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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1602 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.377 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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OMG!!:(

First of all, I did spelling mistake, which is very very bad at this stage.

Second, as per my understanding, I believe this sentence structure is wrong. I am sorry, but I didn't get you exactly. If you can explain me about the sentence and flaws which you mentioned, I would really appreciate.

Thank you so much..!!

Ana.

Hi,

I have a question about the link of integrated speaking. I didn't find detail questions there, such as reading paragraphs with listening. However, some of them have listening attached. So, I didn't understand, How can I submit my speaking recordings only on the basis of half information. OR Do I need to find my own questions or submit it?

Please help me with that.

Thanks,

Ana.