The bar chart illustrates the participation of children in 5 leisure activities ( Stake Boarding, Bike riding, Watching TV, Computer games and Art and Craft ) in Australia.
In overall, most of the boys and girls pass their time by watching TV/video which is about 94%. Whereas boys depicts the least interest in Art and Craft which is about nearly a third and least percentage of girls shows their interest in Skate boarding, it is about exactly a quarter.
According to the bar chart, In Australia 94% children's are interested in watching TV/video. They also interested in electronic/computer games which is about 80% for boys and 60% for girls. For boys there are slightly 10% difference between electronic/computer games and bike riding that means bike riding is 70%. In these 2 activities (electronic/computer games and Bike riding) girls have shown same interest which is about 60%.
On the other side both boys and girls have the least interest in Skate riding activity which is about 30% for boys and 25% for girls. Girls shows some more interest than boys in Art and Craft which is about 40% and 25% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion of children in 5 leisure activities Stake Boarding, Bike riding, Watching TV...
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...ing TV, Computer games and Art and Craft in Australia. In overall, most of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98936170213 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98485311554 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7414110875 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14739899942 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854767752069 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122882421629 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131284761702 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136176663241 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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