Do you agree or disagree with the statement, best things in life comes free of cost.
Life is just an experience of events that are happening. It is a phase where everyone going to struggle for their survival. In that time everyone wants to get best things for them. Even people get those valuable things with the free of cost really amazing. So I agree with that we could not get those things either by paying that means that are comes free of cost these are happiness and love.
The first thing that comes free of cost is happiness. We cannot buy any smile on our face by the money. That can be get with what we have done and we are getting that. For instance during my childhood when I became first in the class five for the first time, I really could not forget that memorable time. That was my happiest moment of my life as I got that happiness without paying anything as money.
Similarly, the love and affection we get from our parents are the most expensive things in the life which cannot be buying. The day from my birth they really love me a lot with care. For example my friend Sudip was born in the rich family. He has well educated parents and both of them are busy in their work. That's why they placed him in the hostel for the study. I know they have lots of money and they provide any good needed for him but could not give their love and affection. So with having lots of money he could not get their parents love although having limited resources, I am with my parents and getting all of their cares with free of cost.
In conclusion, we can say having money only could not get everything in the life. Some things are so rare but those are valuable things of the life that are so expensive that no one can buy but can get free of cost are love and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...urvival. In that time everyone wants to get best things for them. Even people get those ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...nd both of them are busy in their work. Thats why they placed him in the hostel for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25617283951 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03389909824 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466049382716 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.173971205 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5789473684 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221662608759 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806267857733 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954416996129 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164247580694 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783533282265 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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