Businesses should be given complete freedom for making profits?
Investors are very important for growth of country's economy in varied sectors. Their money and investment produces many jobs in many fields. However, usually investors do not care about desire of local people of the country.
On the one hand, when the businesspersons invest their money on places like cinemas, malls or other entertainment places, or any multinational company. Then, the citizens find many vacancies of jobs in their own cities and they do not need to go abroad for working purpose. The country's economy and currency become stable. So, it is good for both the country and its citizens. It also gives opportunities to the people to meet an international environment, because there are many workers from different countries of the world.
On the other hand, these varieties of businesses do not care about the wishes of the people. These businesses increase many environmental issues, for instance, traffic and pollution problems. These types of businesses generate various health issues.
When any multinational company gets permission from the government for developing a franchise of any international brand. They force locals to move to another place. The waste material of these companies and industries makes environments more polluted.
To sum up, healthy environment, clean water and fresh air are the rights of every citizen of every independent country. They are much important than the growth of these businesses. I think if businesspersons and investors will give liberty to do any action to flourish their investments, it will create numerous environmental and social problems for the society.
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