Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements
Recently it has been seen that advertising is getting very popular in all fields of trade. With the advent of technology, there is a huge trend of publicity of different brands all over the world. Although there are tremendous advantages of advertisement but there are some drawbacks too. This essay will elaborate both points of views with final conclusion.
It is seen that advertisement is becoming an important part of setting news buisness. Many resources like social media and television are helpful for publicity. One of benefit of advertisement is that it helps for better selling of a trade . For example tourisam is effected with good and attractive publicity. People are more informed about the product. Another attraction of advertisement is that it provides more options for buyers. This is good way of saving time too. For example someone can make more choices to buy a computer even without wondering around in markets. Thus it seems that advertisement has benefited seller and buyer both.
At the same time advertisement has some disadvantages too . This can cause a competition between different trades. For example some people can spend more money to attract buyers for their low quality products. This way people can be fooled with fake publicity. Secondly too much advertisement make confusions for buyer for selection of products. Sometimes people buy un necessary stuff . This way there is waste of money. So some people think that advertisement has more negative effects on buisness.
In conclusion, although advertisement is getting popularity but it has its own problems. It is recommended that if an advertisement is done with real honesty it will show more better results and will be more beneficial for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19572953737 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96334982312 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1028131637 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4782608696 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2173913043 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174724859814 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558985997608 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709850238967 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109998476097 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150734655646 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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