Since the dawn of the humanity, young people have been considered as the precious source of the society. In some societies, leaders do not let youngsters to participate in social events and have a share in taking vital decisions which have some effects on the future of the society. However, it is the opposite in some other communities. Although some people believe that today young adults have no influence on the important decisions that determined the future of the community, I have a different point of view. As far as I am concerned, I have a penchant for the standpoint that the young have an influential role in the decisions which related to the society's future. There are manifold reasons for holding that opinion, three of which are of paramount importance, which are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, the most striking reason why I support this view is the fact that young adults are now more involved in social issues than the past. By the advent of electronic devices and evolvement in technology, the young are more in touch with each other and as it is said the world changed to “a global village" which everybody knows about others. In this regard, the contribution of social media such as Facebook, YouTube, Twitter, to name but a few, should not be neglected on account of the fact that the society's issues are spread via these media as soon as possible.
Another reason for accepting this opinion has to do with more educated young people these days. It stands to reason that today there are quite a few youngsters pursuing higher education who are capable of proposing practical suggestions and paving the way for taking crucial decisions. Moreover, by galloping rate in spreading numerous universities around the world, more people are now cognizant of what happens in the society. On the other hand, in the past people tended to focus on making money for living, and they did not care about what will happen to their society in that they did not consider themselves as a member of the society.
Last but not least, nowadays young adults can be more effective in making a decision than the past. Today they can establish a campaign against or for something that harms or benefits the society thanks to the vast access to the social media. For instance, in Iran, there is a campaign that wants people not to use their cars one day of the week. With this in mind, the air pollution of the city will decrease. It is worth mentioning that nowadays young people are braver to express their ideas and thoughts than the past, and they can reach their goals using demonstration or other ways.
All in all, with all this taken into account, the young have had many effects on the society through the history. I vehemently subscribe to the view that young people now are more influential on the society's future than the past on the grounds that they have more access to the news, more educated, and have more effective ways than before. The young are always the precious treasures of a society which should be utilized in order to reach success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77943925234 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50212173045 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459813084112 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.985213233 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.761904762 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4761904762 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216283321068 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687523573632 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603030823413 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121293187899 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547600310938 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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