Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced.
Today, every country around the world is facing a common problem of increased amount of garbage. Although with the modernization, industries in various sectors have grown but at the same time this industrial development has increased waste production in the environment. There is no doubt both people and government must take actions to reduce the production of rubbish.
From last two decades, almost every house is producing enormous amount of rubbish on the daily basis. Various reasons are there for such a trend. To begin with, most of the waste comes from packaging from the things we buy. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from pastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping to home. Secondly, however, the amount of waste produce is also result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.
I do believe that government needs to take stern actions to save environment from such wastes. Moreover, they should raise this awareness in public. By promoting the use of reusable bags when shopping, the amount of plastic bags can be greatly reduced. Also children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adult needs to take action. Another important step government must take through sound cycling. It must invest in a technology that can be managed at municipal level. To encourage its citizens to adhere to this program, collection areas for recycling should be accessible.
In conclusion, with the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and planet poisoned by waste.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, as for, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05351170569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63230887447 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5071794427 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5263157895 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200711495775 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548355263943 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453553758347 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110751682564 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146564198754 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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