Question:
Write a composition in about 300 words on the following:
‘You are what you eat.’ What do you think this means and how does it apply to you or the people you know?
You are what you eat
In these days, some people asked me the way of keeping health. In my answer, I said: ‘You are what you eat.’ Some people did not understand that and they hoped me to tell them about it. Today, I will solve this mystery.
In the supermarket, there are people who sell unhealthy food to others who eat the the food and become ill. These food contains some bad ingredients which break our body. Some shops near a school let the food attract students by a sort of good scent. Students can not resist the temptation and buy it. They have done things like that for a long ti...
Sentence: In the supermarket, there are people who sell unhealthy food to others who eat the the food and become ill. These food contains some bad ingredients which break our body.
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 197 200
No. of Characters: 797 900
No. of Different Words: 117 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 3.7
Average Word Length: 4.046 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.936 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 18 20
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 14 15
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 10
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.133 15.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.881 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.52 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5