I believe that university students should be encouraged to attend classes. In this highly competitive world students should be more smarter, intelligent to mitigate challenges faced in future. Its a good opportunity for students to enhance their knowledge, skills and many more. Here are some reasons and examples.
First of all, by attending classes in university students can gain enormous knowledge by their teachers, get information from library. Teachers clarify students problems or repeat the topic until students understand it tarowly. For instance, if a science student have a trouble in ...
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Sentence: Its a good opportunity for students to enhance their knowledge, skills and many more.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a
Suggestion: Refer to Its and a
Sentence: These activities makes students to participate and learn many things.
Description: The fragment activities makes students is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace makes with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Teachers clarify students problems or repeat the topic until students understand it tarowly.
Error: tarowly Suggestion: ?
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