The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison immates in the British prison system. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
Given are two figures revealing the information on the rate of crimes committed by men and women of various ages in the UK and the percentage of male and female prisoners in the UK prison population.
It it clear from the graph provided that the rate of committing crimes in both sexes experiences an exponential rise during the adolecent and reachs the peak at the age of 20. It is also apparent that men are more likely to commit crimes than women are. From only 2 percent in 10-year-old boys, this rate soars dramatically to 16 percent in 20-year-old men. After that, this was followed by considerably fall among men older than 20. The same trend is seen in famale's. There is less than 5 percent of criminal convictions made by women from 20 to 60 years old. Only 2 percent of crimes are committed by 60-year-old men and 0 percent by women at the same age.
It can be seen from the pie chart supplied that the most British prison immates are men with 96 percent, while the proportion of women is just 4 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48924731183 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57569529771 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1577757595 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256218999034 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107430169018 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118054257976 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230636878924 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135245147019 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.