Dear James,
I hope you and your family are well. It's been long since we met and I got very excited when I received your email stating your arrival in New York tomorrow. However, I am so sorry to tell you that I will not be able to see you tomorrow.
Although, I have asked one of my friend to receive you from the airport and to drop you at my apartment where you can stay comfortably. Indeed, It is quite unfortunate that I will not be able to greet you personally as my boss has ordered me to go to Chicago today evening in order to attend a important meeting. Though, I cant apologize enough, but, I hope you will understand my situation.
Also, I would like you to tell me if you are free this weekend as I was wondering if I can visit New Jersey to meet you and spend a great time with you. We both will sit together and share a lot of secrets that can't shared with any one else in this entire world. You are truly special for me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, I hope you and your family are well. Its...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this evening' is used.
Suggestion: this evening
...my boss has ordered me to go to Chicago today evening in order to attend a important meeting....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hicago today evening in order to attend a important meeting. Though, I cant apolo...
^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o attend a important meeting. Though, I cant apologize enough, but, I hope you will ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ogether and share a lot of secrets that cant shared with any one else in this entire...
^^^^
Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... a lot of secrets that cant shared with any one else in this entire world. You are trul...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15656565657 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25248561817 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5582135365 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269180190886 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985393303562 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736373651551 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154225122754 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446344463856 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.