Dear James,
I hope you have been keeping well. It's been too long since we last met and that is why I was eagerly waiting to see you. But sadly, I am writing to let you know that I have cancelled my trip to England now.
As you were aware of the news that my parents were planning to keep the engagement ceremony of my elder sister next month. Unfortunately, due to some problem they have decided to prepone this event, hence, it is happening coming weekend now. Therefore, it is impossible for me to miss the ceremony and visit you.
Though, I am sure that you will understand this scenario, still, I am very sorry for the trouble caused to you as I know that you had even applied for the leaves to spend time with me. I would like to apologize for the inconvenience and would be grateful if you could change the date of your leaves because I am now thinking of visiting next month. If, it suits you, could you please reply me soon, so, I can book my tickets in advance.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Warm wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve cancelled my trip to England now. As you were aware of the news that my pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34517766497 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31763553241 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2464403688 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214205469115 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813303907793 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574608469602 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121207310046 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051458022727 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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