Dear Mr Brown,
I am writing to you in regards to the letter of complaint you send me two days back. To embark upon, I would like to apologize that you are facing so much of trouble because of us.
Allow me to elaborate the situation in my house which is responsible for such kerfuffle milieu. The problem is that one week back my sister had come to visit me with her three children. All the children are under the age of fifteen, these kids like to listen loud music and play all day long. This indeed creates lot of noise and disturbance in house.
Although, I tried to make them understand that how dis comfortable and annoying it is for everyone. But they seemed to ignore my suggestions. However, now I have strictly warned them to alter their behaviour or else I will have to ask my sister to leave.
Lastly, I am very sorry for the inconvenienced caused to you but I am looking forward to see improvement in this situation.
Thank you very much for your patience.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing to you in regards to the letter of complaint you send me two...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... caused to you but I am looking forward to see improvement in this situation. Thank...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54644808743 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56721288212 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4990079209 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213277477012 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747628044908 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772304939847 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11008024803 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799376894614 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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