Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that each language has been an important part of each culture. There are several languages exist in the world which some of them die out yearly. /Some people believe if there are fewer languages in the world, life will be easier. In my view, this issue, as the case with many issues, has both positive and negative aspects.
It may indeed be true to say that language has a dramatic impact on society and culture. As a result, if a language vanish, the culture of countries related to this language will destroy. Undoubtedly, culture of each country shows history of that region and kinds of people with different cultures who live there and people who have a lot of experience about it that remind their couture and their history of their area.
On the other hand, if there are fewer languages in the world, people can travel to other countries without any problems associated with language of that area. In addition to this, global trade among countries are really easier and comfortable when people in each country of the world communicate with each other by a language. Furthermore, children should be adapted to other languages or one international language in order to take into account both their mother language and international language.
In conclusion, we must make an all-out efforts to preserve each language from changes or disappearing.
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