In modern world, all companies try sundry methods to make their advertisement and articles more flamboyant. Hence, they take the help of images because it is a tenet among the society that these are more effective in conveying a message than merely using words and I am no exception to it.
To embark upon, according to the science, human brain has been designed to remember information for a longer period of time through pictures in contrast to listening or reading only. For example, when a girl sees a beautiful dress in a magazine, she tends to recollect it even after years. Conversely, if someone will tell her about the same dress, she might not pay so much of attention to it and thus she will forget it soon. Therefore, not just news channels but even advertising agencies are assimilating this trend to enhance the popularity of their products.
Furthermore, it is true to say that "Less is More". To elaborate this saying, I would like to share my own personal experience here. Last week, I went to a jewellery shop to buy a gold chain. Inspite, of an excellent description of that chain given by the shop owner, I was not convinced to purchase it. Eventually, he showed me a picture of it which instantly attracted me and I bought it. Although, there are many more examples but this one story clearly proves my point.
To put it into a nutshell, explicitly the impact of image is huge on the mind's of people which assist them to take decision swiftly. Therefore, I am of the opinion that no matter how somberly a person listens to something nonetheless the result of seeing it in the form of a picture is always more influential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in contrast, in contrast to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69178082192 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76373894489 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8269118927 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163841337262 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441706413077 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364420981933 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834417040173 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019151258528 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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