Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you to update that I will not be able to join your company on 2nd of October. In our last discussion, I was told that I should be joining the new firm by next week at Chennai location. However, due to few critical reasons I will not be able to join on the planned date. Also, I would like to apologize for the late notice.
Let me explain my situation. My mother is having few health issues and she has been admitted in the hospital to recover from her chronic diseases. Since I have to take care of her for another couple of weeks, I am not able to join your organization in the stipulated timeline. Additionally, there are no tickets available in any modes of transport being the festive time and perhaps this will retard my joining date. I am optimistic in joining the organization on the 3rd week of October. Please postpone my joining date to 16th of October and I hope you empathize my situation. Kindly let me know if you need any other information.
Yours’ sincerely,
Chitra.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... week at Chennai location. However, due to few critical reasons I will not be able...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52820512821 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65270506869 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2389791365 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9230769231 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23648901028 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812055791125 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652972584074 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175882502357 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409187540084 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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