A nation requires same national curriculum study system for its student until college.
A nation is structured through its education system. Every new generation find their ultimate goal of life only by proper guildenns. Now it comes down to the never ending question whether a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college or not. I strongly agree with requirement of same national curriculum until college.
Every student start their education system in such a stage when they are their at most delicate state of mind. They easily adopt themselves with their surroundings. They build their personality according to the demand of their surroundings. And this process mostly continue until they enter college part. So by this time each can learn to think of their own desire. They certainly can introduce themselves to the realistic world. So when they each go through the same curriculum they managed to find their deepest desire of what to do with the future life.
When a student go through a certain curriculum contains with essence of each sector, s/he can build up their mind into a certain sector with which s/he is interested. If we study the background of every successful personality we can certainly observe a similarity between their early educational life. They found their interested path after some ovservation of defferent aspect of educational fields.
Though this issue has its varities of advantages it certainly has drawbacks. Many student can lose their interest in a certain topic by the time they enter college. For some students the path untill college life is toio long. They can lose of of life and distracked from their goal.
With all its point of view whether positive or negative it is certain that A nation certainly require same national curriculum study system untill college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11224489796 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61238883178 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506802721088 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3506203744 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1052631579 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.315789473684 5.21951772744 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327425134278 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119202667723 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168751923593 0.0758088955206 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264874213221 0.150359130593 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230269472301 0.0667264976115 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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