The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.
The bar chart shows the percentage of some problems by people who living abroad according to the range of ages
In gereral, there are a fluctuation in the percentage of three problems for people who live in a new country. Besides, the bar chart shows that all of people with different of ages find both finances and healthcare are the most difficult problems.
It is clear from the bar chart that the greatest problem for middle and older age groups is sorting out healthcare ( 36% and 37% respectively). However, 32% of people aged 18-34 find it hard to stay their healthy which is lower than both range aged.
In the other hand, 35% of people aged 35-54 earn money the biggest problem than both range groups ( 18- 43 years old and over 55).IN comparison, people over 55 years old find this easier, and the percentage is much lower ( 29%).
Middle age group has the biggest percentage among the other groups which the problem is finding school for their children ( about 19%). In contrast, only 6% of people aged 18-34 have this problem while people in over 55 group is the lowest (2%).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61458333333 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24881816956 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9711533331 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219014878607 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112486548191 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585398137378 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147150708255 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590688477483 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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