03/10/2017
In some countries, children start school at the age of four and in other countries at the age of seven. Some people believe that early school start is affecting parent-child relationships.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of starting school early and give your own opinion.
Many believe school education ought to be started at an early age while others disagree with this prospect and claim embarking studying at age of seven is more desirable. Below shortages and benefits of each point of view will be discussed in details and author’s opinion will be stated.
On the one hand, being enrolled in elementary school at age of four brings some indispensable advantages. Firstly, today’s requirements to school graduate as well as a volume of information that has to be absorbed by the offspring while being in the school system have been steadily growing in a recent decade. Thus, those kids who become pupils earlier get an advantage that may help them to be more successful in pursuing a degree at a university level. Secondly, many contemporary parents have to devote a considerable proportion of their lives to working, not educating their progeny. Thus some youngsters may be neglected and do not get needed attention, guidance and role models that are required for proper development of their brains and personal characteristics. Giving a child at school earlier will guarantee all small descendants will get proper preparation and upbringing because teachers who are professional educators will reassure the results.
On the other hand, the idea of starting schooling later in life possesses some fruits as well. Primarily, having a careless childhood is associated with not studying. Young individuals may play and have fun all day long without being forced to sit in one place and to learn how to read, count or draw. Thus, the kids’ personal development is not rushed and they acquire knowledge about the world in their own pace. Furthermore, mothers and fathers of those who will begin education later have a possibility to spend more time with their offspring and to give them love, care and emotions that children need to form healthy personality. A recent psychological research showcased that those youngsters who spent their early years by playing, conversing and chatting with parents have a lower level of anxiety and higher self-esteem than those who did not get the experiences. Those are several benefits of the second idea.
In my opinion, it appears that beginning studying at age of seven is more useful and beneficial for descendants on a long run because being mentally and psychologically healthy is crucial for being a happy adult.
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Essay evaluation report
is associated with not studying
is associated with no studying
is not associated with studying
flaws:
No. of Words: 391 350 //when contents are relatively more, the Unique words percentage will be less.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 391 350
No. of Characters: 1890 1500
No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.6 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.1 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.37.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.45 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.060.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...o working, not educating their progeny. Thus some youngsters may be neglected and do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16624040921 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90794300968 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.387749942 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211660156399 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722289137581 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949735959922 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136569311648 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672034465554 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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