TPO 45
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a great debate about how dependent are the teenagers on their parents to make a decision for them nowadays. It is said that many young people cons always consider their parent's decision. But is this always true? Many people wonder whether teenagers become more independent as society modernize and progress. In my opinion, they are eager to assume their future on their own decision rather than their parents. I believe that young people in modern society do not that much attention to what their parents want. For me, although there are many cases that teenagers are dependent on their parents, most of them are able to make a decision on their own. In this essay, I will address reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, one should take into account this significant fact that people today have more freedom on career and marriage decisions. Parents are not only more open-minded But also more respectful about what their children want than past. As for me, my parents get married not because they loved each other, they do this to obey what their parents ask them to do. but the situation changes as generation change. My sister and I have that right to choose the person to marry.
In approaching this issue, apart from the fact mentioned above, one should regard another subtle point that people are struggling with some decision, they return to their friends. To demonstrate, researcher established an experimental program to estimate that how many people ask their friends to decide in many situations. The results are surprising: over 60 percent of them ask their friends and only 15 percent asks their parents. As a matter of fact, friends provide fresh suggestion beside they can understand us better than our parents because they are from the more similar background than our parents.
last but also not least, we cannot ignore many groups of young people who are dependent on their parents. We cannot deny that many numbers of people rely on their parents in many aspects of their lives. For example, there are many students in my university who come from the rich and privileged family that even don't know why they are studying this course, they just do what their parents ask them.
Although some people are more dependent on their parents, on the great scale, especially compared to the past, young people have more freedom to make a decision. moreover, they are more willing to explore the future with the help of their friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Last
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, apart from, as for, for example, as a matter of fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86904761905 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35713203461 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47380952381 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.675718414 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9545454545 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354200773939 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116581093897 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911108339231 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21317047978 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972350692574 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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