Education is primarily a personal matter; it has little to do with school or college.
I do not agree with the above statement. To bolster my views, I would begin with defining education. Based on my experience, education is the name a civilized man gives to attainment of knowledge. It includes making a person well aware of the world around him, learn how it works and at the same time be able to contribute towards the process of development by applying the skills he learnt while educating himself. Now, every person is not born with a mind of Einstein and Faraday that even if he does not attend school, he would become a renowned personality. Schools and colleges play a very impor...
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one typing error: Sentence:
one typing error:
Sentence: It includes making a person well aware of the world around him, learn how it works and at the same time be able to contribute towards the process of development by applying the skills he learnt while educating himself.
Error: learnt Suggestion: learn
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Score: 6 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 1908 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.576 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.748 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.038 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.496 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.259 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
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