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There has been some debate among business companies whether there are solutions to prevent birds from getting injured by glass. The lecture says that there are no solutions to stop birds from getting injured. However, the reading claims that there are three possible solutions to prevent the birds from injuries.
The first point of dispute is if the one way glass will prevent the birds from any injures. The lecturer says that the one -way glass reflects as mirrors and birds don't understand mirrors. when they see the reflection of the sky or the trees in the glasses. They think that it is true and they fly through the glasses. However, the reading refutes this point by saying that one way glass will protect the birds because they are transparent from only one direction, so birds will think they are a solid barriers.
Another controversial issue is if the colorful designs of the glass will protect birds from injuries. The lecture contents that the birds will not understand the small openings in the strips designs and they will think they are small holes and fly through them. Also, if the holes will be extremely small, the openings from the designs of the room will be too dark. But, the author of the reading opposes this point saying that the designs with small openings will prevent the birds from getting injured. Also the openings allow the light to pass on to the rooms .
The final point of dispute is if the magnetic field will prevent the birds from getting injured.
The lecture asserts that birds only use magnetic field while they are migrating for a long distance. However, for short distances birds use their eyes and the bright light to navigate. Yet, the passage disagrees. It claims that the magnetic field on the building will prevent birds from getting injured while they are flying and help them to navigate in the right directions.
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... of the sky or the trees in the glasses. They think that it is true and they fly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84592145015 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22639877434 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438066465257 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6355520519 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3529411765 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0649457637113 0.272083759551 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300846078052 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195356553358 0.0662205650399 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441634943643 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00832057966128 0.0443174109184 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 53.8541721854 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.42419426049 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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