you are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. Write a letter to complain about the same to city council.
In your letter
introduce yourself
describe the situation
say what you want the officer to do for you
Dear Municipality Commissioner,
i am writing this letter to express my sheer annoyance about the road quality nearby my home.
My name is Virat and I live at 3 Sigma Society, Ahmedabad India. The road starting from my society to the main road of ahmedabad is full of bumpy drive. This road is called "Linking Road". It is quite a disgusting experience that everyone has to go through a worse experience while driving on this road these days. This bad road has developed too many deep potholes and rough edges and now the monsoon has added to the predicament. Additionally, it is not for the first time Ahmedabad road have been called out for being a poor condition. Owing to the bad road condition, everyone has to maneuver their vehicles around these bumps and potholes leading them to the adjoining lane only to create more traffic.
Because of this, vehicles burn more fuel than they should do to cover the distance.
It is time to City Council either repaires or constructs safe roads. People pay a huge amount of tax, not for experiencing a "road trip from hell". Ergo, I request you to have the said road constructed with better endurance that could withstand all weather.
i look forward to hearing from you on this matter. My email address is Virat.123@xyz.com and coordinate is (756)8877333554.
Sincerely yours,
Virat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00438596491 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8896386525 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635964912281 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2908007933 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0666666667 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164100233334 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501410298147 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477320287358 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799593119343 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650122137154 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.