TPO43
Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
There is no doubt that nowadays interaction between parents and their children plays key role in children's lives. No one can deny the effects of parents behavior in children's daily activities A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is which things are the best ones for parent to spend their time to do with children. Some people believe it is better to use of time to have playing games or sports. However, some others may take an opposing viewpoint and believe it is better to do things related to schoolwork. From my own perspective, the first belief is true. As far as I'm concerned, It is certainly beneficial for children to play games or sport with their parents. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most prominent reasons.
First of all, one should regard this significant fact that playing sport can be good for one's physical health. As a matter of fact when children exercise regularly they not only in normal weight but also they are in less risk of many diseases such as heart attack or high-blood-pressure. To illustrate, I would like to mention the available statistics about this issue. According to statistics playing sport can reduce risk of heart attack by over 60 percent. This clarifies that how much can parents benefit them by playing sport with them.
In approaching the issue, one should regard another subtle point that when parents play with their children, their relationship become stronger. Needless to say modern society make parents very busy with their work and they don't have enough time to spend with children therefore, it can cause a gap between them. However playing game together can establish close relationship between them. To demonstrate, take for example a kid who feel lonely because her parents are busy at work most of their time but at weekends when they play volleyball together at the park near their house they feel how they love each other and also it creates a friendly atmosphere in the family.
The last but not the least reason is that, it can also have advantages for one's mental health. In other words children who participate in sports usually have a positive mood thereby they can handle their stress better an fell less nervous.
Actually, there are some other reasons and examples, supporting these claims, which I have refrained from mentioning above. All in all, the best use of parent's time is to spend playing with their children. This not only can make children be productive both mentally and physically but also build a valuable relationship among them.
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- Tpo30 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93071593533 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61559757848 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512702078522 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5244541447 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37287455737 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111863478876 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118695479182 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208209534067 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127703355446 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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