Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past then they were nowadays, Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are considered to be living god for all students. The amount of knowledge and experience they share in our education tenure are abundant. However, some people believe that instructors are not valued over the years when compared to few decades ago. I strongly disagree to this thought, which will be explained in the following passage along with suitable examples.
In many universities the old student’s alumni associations conduct a get together for every 5 years, where they invite their teachers to share vivid moments of their past. In addition, the union will offer mementos to all the scholars to thank for their contribution. Moreover, some students still consult with their mentors while taking critical decision in their career, which shows the importance of them. For instance, my friend gets the advice from his school teachers whenever he takes critical decision in his life and he certainly believes the experience of his teachers is always precious. Thus, it is believed, the above instances exemplify that teachers are valued over the years.
Do the technology revolutions have decreased their role at schools? No. Now, technology innovations are evident at the educational institutions. When the syllabus is customized to mobile applications, the student uses them to self-study their subjects and to gain better understanding on their portions. For examples, my neighbor's son use Byjus mobile software for self-learning but still get the assistance from his teacher to get more insight on the subject. Therefore, it is assumed, despite technological invention and e-learning courses teachers are valued more.
To sum up, as the proverb says, “the teachers is like the candle, which lights others in consuming itself”. Until the universe exist teachers play an eccentric role in every student’s life, as well as their value never get reduced till the end of humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...not valued over the years when compared to few decades ago. I strongly disagree to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92669703857 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3420053597 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123795194955 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420599054108 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281081487541 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757884538294 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187060698942 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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