The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?
In view of technological development, Internet has become one of the most significant factors affecting our lives. It is undeniable that nowadays almost every person has an easy access to the worldwide web. Unfortunately, this inevitably has led to people's addiction to the Internet, which consequently resulted on people with its drawbacks.
A number of consequences arise from this problem. Primarily, the web directly affects human's world outlook and personality itself. The main reason here is a useless and wrong information, which we can call Internet rubbish. It teaches them in an inappr...
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Sentence: As a result, people are more pessimistic, lazier and uncommunicative.
Description: The fragment , lazier and is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace lazier with adjective
Sentence: However, the main part here is to not to lose personality and humanity, because without this we are no longer humans.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to to and not
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