While most regimes claim that the economic growth of a nation remains instrumental objectives, i believe that both economic build up and other sorts of aspects like social equality and healthy well being of a society are crucial for the development of a state. This essay will discuss both sides with relevant examples.
On the one hand, firstly, booming economies of any nations upgrade the quality of lives of people because the strong economy opens up copious opportunities for employment where common people can earn reasonable salaries, which usually enable general folks to enjoy better stand...
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Essay evaluation report
of a empire.
of an empire.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1803 1500
No. of Different Words: 227 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.303 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.017 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.68 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.024 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nation remains instrumental objectives, i believe that both economic build up and...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ty. Secondly, a significant drop in the governments debt is one of the major advancements o...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...s is immensely influential is that when pubic appear genuinely delighted, people are ...
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Line 5, column 914, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...s of a community need to be highlighted equally as financial resources. In conclusion, ...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y indispensable for the augmentation of a empire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42352941176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09494509178 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4688220962 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111601087526 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348039564833 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316819831784 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664899371887 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397213750945 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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