47-W1
This topic is regarding whether Pterosaurs are capable of powered flight. The listening and the reading contents hold different perspectives on it.
To begin with, the reading indicates that the Pterosaurs are unable to produce enough energy for powered flight because they are cold-blooded and have a slow metabolism. However, the lecture argues that the Pterosaurs are warm-blooded so that they can produce enough energy for the powered flight according to the recent study of their fossils which testifies the presence of dense hair cover, a typical character of warm-blooded animals to keep body temperature.
Secondly, according to the reading passage, the Pterosaurs can't make the powered flight because they are too weight. Nevertheless, the speaker refutes and says that the Pterosaurs are in fact unusually light for its size. The reason is that their bones are hollow, which makes their weight low enough to keep airborne by powered flight.
Finally, the lecture also denies the Pterosaurs' inability of jumping from their legs or running fast enough to launch themselves into the air as the reading passage puts forth. The reason is that the Pterosaurs are different from birds when they take off from the ground. Birds only use two limbs, however Pterosaurs use four limbs to help them push off from the ground. And they can also run fast enough or jump high enough to launch themselves with the help of four limbs.
To sum up, the reasons proposed by the reading are not satisfactory and comprehensive enough to draw the conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... to the reading passage, the Pterosaurs cant make the powered flight because they ar...
^^^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to weight'?
Suggestion: to weight
...ake the powered flight because they are too weight. Nevertheless, the speaker refutes and ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'weighted'.
Suggestion: weighted
...the powered flight because they are too weight. Nevertheless, the speaker refutes and ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12252964427 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61412179716 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4500617812 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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