08/11/2017
You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.
Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter,
. explain that you would like to apply for the job
. give some details of any relevant experience that you have
. specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing to express my interest in having a part-time job as a waiter in your restaurant. Your place is conveniently situated near a multi-story building where I rent an apartment; moreover, in the advertisement, you promised to pay a considerable wage to those who will work well with clientele.
Previously, I have worked in three restaurants as a waiter and an assistant of a cook. Working at those great places taught me to be polite, respectful, quick and developed in me a decent memory and a desire to acquire novel knowledge and experience. To prove my words, I have references from my former employers with telephone numbers.
Finally, nowadays I study at university and pursue a master degree in management and finances. Thus, I can devote my weekdays’ evenings to the work. I am available from Monday to Friday and can be at the workplace as early as 6:00 pm. In addition, the number of assignments will significantly decline in the next month and I will be able to work during weekends as well. Unfortunately, the hours when I will be available are unknown.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
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Essay evaluation report
Working at those great places taught me to be polite, respectful, quick and developed in me a decent memory
Working at those great places taught me to be polite, respectful, quick and developed a decent memory
I study at university
I study at a university
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 202 250
No. of Characters: 938 1200
No. of Different Words: 129 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.644 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.964 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.14 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.696 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14564017374 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5514475125 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924831689531 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327846031914 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043140256581 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635849013475 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427610157241 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.