In many countries people who are working are very more respectful comparing to the sedentary people who rely on the other citizens for their own problems.
In many countries people who are working are very more respectful comparing to the sedentary people who rely on the other citizens for their own problems. These people do think that a person who works hard is providing more profits to the future generation with enhancing the life style of the citizens. These countries even have stipulated specific days each year to provide compliment for these assidulous workers. Besides that many people do work for achieving to their interests. In fact these people are regarding works as their avocation.
In many countrises people do respect the labours who do painestaking works in erecting the buildings, educating the strudents, or even farmers who are devoting their tiime in agricultures. The reason of these people for work in contributing their time for enhance the level of life in their own countries. These people do like their citizens have access to better furnitures and appliances and they do marry very soon in their aadolescent. The second imprtant reason for these workers is extinguishing the poverty in the society. They do convict the governemtn fo their poor life. These peoblem can not be rectified by the governments method in providing tissue for their citizens for wiping their eyes forom the tears of their paper fatheir who have died just because he hadn’t any money to cure his cancer. These negligent gvovernents do suppose to their citizens to look at their heereditary in order to provide a meager money for buying their requirements. These all designates the poor attention of the governments to the people who are trying hard in their common tedious jobs. Even you can see that in harshness the take impurterbable poseur that all the things are under thheir control.
Many assidulous workers do their works just for the fact that in this way they are able to reach to their ambitions. The inveigle that an artificial intelligence professor provides for his student that he appreciates his fecundity in the theoretical cconcepts and he do suggest him to do conscientious hinking in rsuming hs career in designing a man like robot in his lif. Many of these students are beguiled and do their best to rovide felicity for their fprofessor for hisvaluable advice. They even are not chary in providing an exact roadmap for themselves and follow the passe dictum without demure. In the end, many of these once ambitious students find themselves in a deluge of penchants that causes these not to even have an oblique look at their sorrounding. Their quixotic yens can even become problematic for the society that waits fror them to use their metculous look in solving so many misconceptions about the opulance west countries. These people are also pruning their ambitious thinking, but they are not able to expunge their ultimate ambitions that is designing an prodigious Robot which can make decisions with its own. When once asks forrom their professors that whats their opinion about their previous studets they almost always waffle and answer the questions with prevarication. The fugutuve advices of them are not practical anymore and so is available the elapsed age of their students. The students in the futre resume the same method by resorting to sophistry. They ramble when their students ask them questions about calculating the kinetic energy in the latest robotic device. They even provide spurious answers that may discombobulate the students. They start their speak with this prefatory statement “hello dumbfound students do resume your foolish ideas, I have no time to speak about them.” The sordid educational system also exacerbate the situation when it has no secession for these fake professors.
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- The passage states some doubt 3
- Universities are every year providing obligatory courses for student to force them alter their method regardless of their requirement for their future life. 73
- The passage states some doubt 80
- Many people are striving to extend their lonevity by living in a healthy way. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...own problems. These people do think that a person who works hard is providing mor...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ese peoblem can not be rectified by the governments method in providing tissue for their ci...
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Line 3, column 921, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'meager money'.
Suggestion: meager money
...t their heereditary in order to provide a meager money for buying their requirements. These al...
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Line 3, column 967, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er money for buying their requirements. These all designates the poor attention of th...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y are able to reach to their ambitions. The inveigle that an artificial intelligence profess...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ity in the theoretical cconcepts and he do suggest him to do conscientious hinking...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this once' or 'these onces'?
Suggestion: this once; these onces
...tum without demure. In the end, many of these once ambitious students find themselves in a...
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Line 5, column 1083, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ir ultimate ambitions that is designing an prodigious Robot which can make decisio...
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Line 5, column 1186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... once asks forrom their professors that whats their opinion about their previous stud...
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Line 5, column 1683, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s that may discombobulate the students. They start their speak with this prefatory s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 88.0 33.0505617978 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3103.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 604.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13741721854 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73518101557 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488410596026 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 963.9 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3576474916 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.925925926 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3703703704 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40740740741 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393655688655 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135214386219 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188428359976 0.0758088955206 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360979363186 0.150359130593 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196731072516 0.0667264976115 295% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 166.0 100.480337079 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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