The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information about how much carbon dioxide was emitted per person (on average) in four countries (United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) during forty years (1967-2007).

We can see that CO2 emissions per person in Italy and Portugal was to increase dramatically over the entire time. Looking at Italy, which sent out more CO2 than Portugal, the rate CO2 emissions per person climbed markedly from well above 4 (metric tonnes) to just beneath 8 (m.t). This trend was reflected in CO2 gas in Portugal, with the lowest amount in all nations in 1967 (1 m.t) and reaching its peak at roughly 5 (m.t) at the end of period.

However, turning to U.K. and Sweden, we see that this pattern was roughly reversed. United Kingdom, with the highest average CO2 emissions between these countries, had emitted 11 (m.t) in 1967 and went down slowly to approximately 9 (m.t). Average emissions of this gas in Sweden was a noticeable exception, as it had a marked rise and fall, peaking at just over 10 (m.t) in 1977, dropping by about half (similar to Portugal CO2 emissions) in 2007.

Overall, it is apparent that U.K. and Portugal (although had a reversed patterns) had sent out the highest and lowest amount of CO2 among four nations over the period in question.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pattern'?
Suggestion: pattern
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76146788991 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46071738311 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.301530097 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.0 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 16.8248392259 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260276816481 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135568611033 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855192965089 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163284661905 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801463157117 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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