A nation is built up by the people as a whole, not merely by a ruler, artists, and scientists. A Nation is not a collection of few individuals who collaborated together for the achievement of a common goal, rather it is a cohesive unit where each one can strive for its own goals in life and nation facilitates in it.
Most of the public is comprised of normal people hence if a nation is not working towards the betterment of their lives then it would be equivalent to some commercial organization whose sole purpose is profiteering. Creation of some art form will be appreciated by few individuals, it is not going to help in the betterment of masses. A great nation will naturally produce good scientists and artists. The general welfare of people does consider various needs of people, which includes artistic freedom and providing means for scientific advancement. The nation's job is to promote such things but not at the cost of general welfare, such as providing education, medical facilities, basic infrastructure, and other amenities that are required by people. Such a nation will definitely produce great work of arts and science. Ony when people have these basic facilities and they don't have to worry about them, they start to think, to express themselves through various other means, and arts and science is just that expression. So a flourished and prosperous a nation will produce great works of arts and science, it is not the other way round.
- Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your r 50
- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... life and nation facilitates in it. Most of the public is comprised of norma...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...itates in it. Most of the public is comprised of normal people hence if a nation is not ...
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Suggestion: don't
...le have these basic facilities and they dont have to worry about them, they start to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87951807229 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86745863002 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7044192415 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219517106827 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900166152728 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469157149638 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17043319838 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00712287911769 0.0667264976115 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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