No doubt the prime duty of students is to study but they must do some thing for social welfare activities.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Students are needless to say,the future of a country. We can easily predict the future of a country from nature,preferences and attitudes of the students. However, there is not doubt the main perpose of pupil is study but participate in social activities play a phenomenal roul in their life.Here ,I am personaly inclined with this statement.
To begin with, countless social evils have taken place in jet age of 21.st century such as dowery systemsystem, unemployment, illiteracy, global warming and many more which are the obstacles of a nation's progress but these social problems have been developing for last ten decades. Now a days students organise seminars and blood donation campus which are the part of social welfare.
There are ample points to support my view. First and foremost,growth of a country is in the hand of students as universally accepted ,"tree is known by fruits" if children participate in social work on the world wide then the name and fame of students and country would bright. As universally acknowledged, " knowledge in youth is wisdom in age"if students involve in social works then moral values must be adopted by students. Consequencely they must apply it in their life and they against the social bane. To illustrate that a survey is condected by,time magazine revealed that there is not any place of social evil inin life of social worker from young age to die. However, the greatest guidence. Majority of young people can made awared and motivate by advertisement, pamphlet and delivering to speeches in country side and urban areas.
Conversely,some proportion of masses assert that ,as universally consider,"if you chase two rabbits,you will not catch either one"so they think students study only reather than social welfare activities because they think it diverts their consentration from study to other actions.
As per my above discussion,it has become evident that, to indulge in social work is banification as humanity and students help can save one's life and social activities should be started with schooling because as universally accepted,"all thing grow with time-except grief.
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Sentence: However, there is not doubt the main perpose of pupil is study but participate in social activities play a phenomenal roul in their life.Here ,I am personaly inclined with this statement.
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Sentence: To begin with, countless social evils have taken place in jet age of 21.st century such as dowery systemsystem, unemployment, illiteracy, global warming and many more which are the obstacles of a nation's progress but these social problems have been developing for last ten decades.
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Sentence: Conversely,some proportion of masses assert that ,as universally consider,'if you chase two rabbits,you will not catch either one'so they think students study only reather than social welfare activities because they think it diverts their consentration from study to other actions.
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Sentence: As per my above discussion,it has become evident that, to indulge in social work is banification as humanity and students help can save one's life and social activities should be started with schooling because as universally accepted,'all thing grow with time-except grief.
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