The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit.
Tourism industry has always been booming industry and it lured businessmen to invest and earned heavy profits to them. This industry contributes enormously to a country's economy. Therefore, I am strongly against the idea that tourism benefits a country rarely and there are various points to support my view.
The most important reason why tourism industry flourishes and supports a country is that every year lacs of tourists visit other countries across the world and upsurge lustrous businesses in those industry. For instance, a survey conducted by Times of India has revealed that tourist ind...
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