In America, customers can return a purchased item for a full refund
within thirty days. Do you agree or disagree with this policy? Develop
your position with illustrations and reasons.
In my opinion, I agree with this strategy for several reasons.
First of all, it is considered a source of flexibility for customers circumstances. For instance, last month, I bought a new trouser from one of a famous shop in trading center. When I arrived home, it didn't appear suitable for my body and I heard from my father that my uncle died and I couldn't come back to refund it at the same day so This thirty days permit me to had my full money so it is wonderful.
Second, customers become trusted with their shop which accustomed to buy from it. As with that people can buy anything without fear of losing their money. For example, people can purchase items which is high cost with one with less cost.so It is greatful way.
Third, the owner of shops who implement this strategy gain more benefit than others. As they gather more customers who purchasing everything in each ceremony from them. In fact, it is founded a strong relationship between sale man and his customer. It is good financial relation.
For those reasons, full refund of purchased items within thirty day is very great way for more finance.
- childhood is the most beautiful time in your life 50
- childhood is the happiest time of a person's life 60
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- traveling to foreign countries is better than moving in their own country like going to different cities in the country. 73
- childhood is the most beautiful time of a person's life. Do you agree? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...trading center. When I arrived home, it didnt appear suitable for my body and I heard...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...from my father that my uncle died and I couldnt come back to refund it at the same day ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r shop which accustomed to buy from it. As with that people can buy anything witho...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...strategy gain more benefit than others. As they gather more customers who purchasi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67336683417 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48212721903 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.861128311 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270673473096 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952924351503 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827956033692 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164162006801 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804492454503 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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