In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, aeroplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important of them?
The substantial influences of selecting the most vital innovation have sparked a controversy amongst the public all around the globe. Although a specific argument claimed that all innovations are important with the same weight, some intellectuals debate otherwise and hold an opponent's view. I am highly inclined to accept that computer and information technologies are the most human achievement in the past 100 years. The agenda of this article is to provide reasons and supports for selecting computers and IT as the best human-invented tools and will reach a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous evidence why computing devices are important. The most remarkable one rooted in the fact that digital communication changed the world more than any previously advanced tools. For instance, an outcome of a prominent university's studies uncovered that the majority of people rely on their mobiles for communication rather than face-to-face chatting. In addition, it is alleged that developing and IT and the Internet boost others innovative ideas as well. Hence it can be clearly seen that higher IT and related technologies are two folds in recent 50 years.
Moreover, it can be clearly seen that personal computers and computing clusters could result in satellite navigations, remote sensing, telecommunications, remote voting, telehealth, online banking, paperless offices, online collaborations, as well as cloud computing. The potential influence of advanced computing technologies and fibre-optic networking lies in the fact that laptops and tablets are undetachable part of our daily life. Mobile applications and web conferencing are two examples of recent advancements in computer high tech.
To recapitulate, while there are several facts and evidence why computer advancements is the most influential innovation in human history, the area of information technologies gives more credence and reach top rank in the list of human innovations in past century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... boost others innovative ideas as well. Hence it can be clearly seen that higher IT a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23419232576 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8464717092 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814840296393 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299911017922 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411916730129 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503808033756 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474907431648 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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