You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work. Write a letter to your manager and say
– What problem do you have?
– What difficulties does this create for you?
– What could be done about it?
Dear Mr.Robins,
I am writing to inform you about the problem that I have encountered while I was working with my computer yesterday.
As you know I was working to make the accounting report ready for the CEO of the company. I was in the middle of printing the documents that suddenly my system stopped working. I did restart my computer and turned it on and off a few times but it was futile.
As I should make the report ready till the end of the week I believe that this is an emergency case and I need someone who is expert in this field and can handle the problem as soon as possible.
I would be grateful if you could ask the IT department to send one of their staff to come and check my computer. I am sure that they can fix the computer in an appropriate time.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Robins
Dear Mr.Robins, I am writing to inform you about th...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... I would be grateful if you could ask the IT department to send one of their staff t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the computer in an appropriate time. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34567901235 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44590927553 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0487007994 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227678432427 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844648166346 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716837347906 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1232666871 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836168756357 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.