Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about whether they should eat vegetable or meat to obtain a health lifestyle. Some people believe that eating meat can bring some negative influences to our health while I agree that vegetable play a vital role in helping people to acquire healthy lifestyle but people do not have to fully stop consuming meat.
On one hand, there are various reasons why people tend to choose plant food for having a healthy diet. Firstly, using vegetable is a way to alleviate the risk of getting health problems such as obesity, diabetes and heart diseases. This could be because vegetable does not have too much salt, sugar and fat which are the primary reason cause people getting health problems. In addition, plant food provides a large amount of calories which people can achieve easily. For example, Potato is considered as a top of preference food which not only contain a great amount of calories but also have a high vitamin.
On the other hand, plant food can have some negative impacts to our health if we consume it too much constantly for a long time. First and foremost, it is not capable of providing fully energy which people eat normal food have. For example, vitamin and minerals are essential elements for children to grow up normally however if they are a big fan of vegetarian, they are not able to have all of the energy which their body need as vegetables do not provide vitamin B12. Therefore, having a sorely plant food is a best method for a short time. Furthermore, meat contribute directly vitamin and minerals to our body which enable people to build muscles and maintain skin and bone. Thus, without meat people do not have healthy body.
In conclusion, although plant food have a role to play in reducing some health diseases it seems to me that people do not need to stop eating meat to achieve a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to plant'
Suggestion: to plant
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ato is considered as a top of preference food which not only contain a great amou...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...f vegetarian, they are not able to have all of the energy which their body need as vegetab...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('sorely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plant') instead of another adjective.
... provide vitamin B12. Therefore, having a sorely plant food is a best method for a short time....
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...herefore, having a sorely plant food is a best method for a short time. Furthermo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74461538462 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38038135277 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516923076923 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7688451684 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24554871354 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964765459887 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083399107539 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175064475959 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623505017737 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.