First and foremost, the economic situation in the world is somehow predictable and by perceiving the routine of the investments in the capital countries you will find the way which you are better to invest your money. For instance, I knew many solemn investors in my country which is Iran who always follows the breaking news of Wall street stock market in New york to just determine the greater entrepreneurs' ideas in their business even though their New York stock market rarely might hit my country's economic circumstances. As the matter of the fact, getting priceless knowledge about various criteria is the most important outcome of following world's new.
Additionally, there are many subjects that we can absorb from each other even they won't affect us directly. For instance, the recent Tornados in southern America was a remarkable example for me. The way that country managed the critical situation in that moment, the global reaction toward that catastrophic disaster and the following circumstances was replete with the outstanding notions. On the other hand, for months later a destructive earthquake shook the west of my country, Kermanshah province and as the result, thousands of people have been expired, and most of the population have gotten homeless. The most noticeable difference of this disaster versus the Catrina Tornado was the poor crisis management of the government which has led the victims' lives to the chaotic position. That was the big shock for me since I understood the genuine caliber of my country in such controls.
All in all, the mentioned arguments lead us to the conclusion that we are getting closer every day by the paramount role of technology and that is fabulous since we all can uptake many new notions by other countries advancements or even the fiascos. I recommend all people spend just half an hour in a day to grasp more familiarity about world's novelties and vicissitudes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08176100629 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77975326297 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3747383809 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.909090909 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122315229623 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462339118576 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431322664511 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07477321312 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307810776228 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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