some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents.others,however,believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents.others,however,believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

I strongly agree with both views.firstly strict punishments needed to reduce traffic violations because people should have fear while driving.They should concentrate only on driving.strict punishments like cancelling licence,putting them in prison and giving blood money to the dead persons family.However other measures like fastening the seat belt as soon as we enter into the car.wearing helmet.following the road signals are part and parcel of life while driving.These are more effective in improving road safety.

Secondly,new generations like to drive very fast without following any traffic rules.In my opinion every nuke and corner we should keep a hidden camera to assess the speed limit and the violations.so that people will atleast obey the rules and fear of driving.

On other hand strict punishments are not only the way to reduce accidents but also to teach them while taking licence,the strict rules and regulations and also the written examination should be there.so that they can atleast remember what they have taught in theory classes and the tests should be strict enough.

In summary both the views and important for the betterment of reducing traffic accidents and my opinion is following safety measures are important while driving.Life is important for everyone and think that some are waiting for you.safety is first.

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Sentence: Safety is first.
Description: The fragment is first . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace first with adjective

Sentence: In my opinion every nuke and corner we should keep a hidden camera to assess the speed limit and the violations.
Error: nuke Suggestion: ?

Sentence: So that people will atleast obey the rules and fear of driving.
Error: atleast Suggestion: at least

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para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

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No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 224 350
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.869 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.969 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.162 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5