write a paragraph to give your opinion about the negative effects pf social network on teenager student
With the advancement in technology, the social network plays as essential role in teenagers’s live. It helps them keep in touch with family members, friends and relatives a far can easily access information for their school projects, research and homework.
Since most youths are spending more and more time online in popular media such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, social networking causes a range of negative effects on teenagers. The first impact on students is they lose their valuable time to sit in front of the laptop instead of taking part in outdoor activities and much lesser time on socializing in person with others. In addition to, many students to their gadget without concentrating on their study This causes reduction in their academic performance, and concentration to study well.
Next, the overuse of social media on a daily basis has many negative effects on the health. They more stomach aches, sleeping problems, as well as anxiety and depression. Besides, social networking lead to many other psychological disorders, including various antisocial behaviors as well as aggressive tendencies It is undeniable that Internet gives us opportunity to approach new technology as well as modern life. However, social media can increase risks of violence and crime . Teenagers or youth play intense games, watch videos, read bad news will relate to negative action. Violence becomes their reality and they involve in crime activities because they are unable to distinguish between reality and fantasy
In conclusion, social networking can be beneficial in moderation but it cause bad consequences for students. They need to be aware of perspicaciously when using the social networking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43609022556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93708428733 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.1319259415 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199145517941 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745369756595 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501414953119 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114844682537 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222717648538 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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