The diagram illustrates the process of converting geothermal energy into electricity. Overall, there are five stages in the process, beginning with cold water in a tank and ending with electricity in a tower.First of all, cold water is stored in a tank. Next, the cold water is pumped down to the underground through a tube as deep as 4,5 kilometres. Once the cold water arrives the injection well, the water flows through the geothermal zone, where hot rocks are embedded. At this point, the cold water is heated up by the hot rocks. As the hot water hits the production well, the water enters into another tube. Then the hot water is pumped up to a condenser, where the hot water is transformed into steam. In the last second stage, the steam is transported to the turbine and enable the turbine to generate power. Finally, the produced electricity is sent to the electricity tower.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development? 78
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 73
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 65
- Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment.What causes global warming?What solutions are there to this problem? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
... and ending with electricity in a tower.First of all, cold water is stored in a tank....
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75974025974 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6642454362 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5650490303 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0458875423282 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271022346899 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436700545819 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458875423282 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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