A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Give contact details for when you are away
Give instructions about how to care for your pet.
Describe other household duties
Dear John,
Thank you so much for honouring my request to take care of my place while I am away. I really appreciate your kind gesture.
I am writing to brief you about the main chores you will have to do in my absence. As you probably already know, I keep an aquarium at home. So your most important task is to take care of my fish. They mean a lot to me! Basically, all that you need to do is to feed them and clean their water filter. As for the food, just fill up the feeder every other day. It is located at the top right of the aquarium; you can’t miss it! As for the filter, you need to clean it once every 3 days.
Other than that, there isn’t much to do. It would be great if you could keep the place clean. There are two trash bins in the kitchen. Put the leftover food and other waste in the blue bin and recyclable items in the green one. The garbage man will come and collect them every day. If you have any other questions, please don’t hesitate to contact. I will be available via email or phone.
Many thanks,
Rahul.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19024390244 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1037006005 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0955401265 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.6875 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8125 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21308280865 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607878892298 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499417265091 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149714929116 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552604353707 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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