I thoroughly agree with the given statement and It is an undeniable fact that advice is like snow-the softer it falls the longer it dwells upon, and deeper it sinks into the mind.
Initally to put forward my views i would like to assert that advice can be quite challenging depending on the situation advice comes with great responsibility if it imprecise it can be misleading and disasterous. To justify it i would like to quote an example that , advice is like cooking you should try it before you feed it to other. one must have through knowledge about the matter they are giving advice about,only then it can prove beneficial for them.
i would like to support my point with the help of another example that, the trouble with advice is that it is usually something you don't want to hear.i would recommended to ask someone with experience for advice because most likely they have been through it. therefor they have better experience .
In conclusion by taking everything into consideration , it can be said that many receive advice, only the wise profit from it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d. Initally to put forward my views i would like to assert that advice can be...
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...ert that advice can be quite challenging depending on the situation advice comes ...
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...sleading and disasterous. To justify it i would like to quote an example that , a...
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...ice is that it is usually something you dont want to hear.i would recommended to ask...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended asking'.
Suggestion: recommended asking
...something you dont want to hear.i would recommended to ask someone with experience for advice beca...
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Suggestion: recommend
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Suggestion: .
...it. therefor they have better experience . In conclusion by taking everything i...
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...ation , it can be said that many receive advice, only the wise profit from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59317102967 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6605779532 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194106619066 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829517552504 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051533863632 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10443497418 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621176292473 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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