Nowadays, the increase in the aging population is a long-running debate among public all around the world, which leads to a moot question" is there any advantages or not?". It is a widely held the view that aging population is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of it.
to begin with, there are several reasons that I believe there are many positive features in the aging population due to improvement in medical care. First and foremost is that industrials sectors need to use the experience of aging workers to educate younger employees. For example, a group of profound economist working at a prestigious university conducted a survey among many countries to understand the relationship between aging population and productivity in factories. Therefore, the result was statistical significance and revealed that those who use more aged population are three times more successful in their factories.
on the other hand, many opponents of providing more health care for people to living longer are argued that this comes at the huge cost to authorities. there is little room doubt that increasing health care in order to increase life expectancy leads to allocating large sums of money in medical sectors. In addition, they believe that government should put their budget on another part of societies such as education and environment protection to provide a better life for younger.
To recapitulate, although there are several compelling on both sides, my personal sentiment is that nations have to consider both aging populations to providing them better health care and better incentive for younger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28731343284 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95061028005 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.770667979 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.7 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224486651415 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083846841373 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327207859795 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123984055819 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041207005527 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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