Many people believe that the main aim for university education is o help graduates to find better jobs, while some people believe that university education has wider benefits for individual and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The people believe university education has extensive benefits for themselves and society some people find that study in university could be better in good career. Although several also think that most important aim for university education progress in to show better job. I believe that after university education the people could advance in their life and get a lot of who interest their life.
In modern era, the define a job in different ways. There are many people who they think that in their life very important while they take good a job. So they try and believe while some people find a lot of knowledge and skill in environment university. Not only the people join university to know about knowledge or education but also they have dream about and good position with government, but there are many people think that education in university there not complete if they useful for a job. Because good skill social only get from our experience. Although someone graduate of university, they cannot directly practice by work. Therefore they have to proactive in their work, so worker view become personality plus in their life.
In the other hand, some people show about university will be mostly benefits for individual and society while they finish of university. They who graduate of university could get many opportunity take at the job. They have possibility in get interpersonal skill. Buy cars and easier to take anythings in their life or something who made they happiness.
In conclusion there are a lot of subject interest in university education area for improve our knowledge and character. They who follow until university they will easy get opportunity to meet many people and more than they could develop their brain.
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Sentence: I believe that after university education the people could advance in their life and get a lot of who interest their life.
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Sentence: In modern era, the define a job in different ways.
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Sentence: There are many people who they think that in their life very important while they take good a job.
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Sentence: Not only the people join university to know about knowledge or education but also they have dream about and good position with government, but there are many people think that education in university there not complete if they useful for a job.
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Sentence: Because good skill social only get from our experience.
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Sentence: In the other hand, some people show about university will be mostly benefits for individual and society while they finish of university.
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Sentence: They who graduate of university could get many opportunity take at the job.
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Sentence: They have possibility in get interpersonal skill.
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Sentence: Buy cars and easier to take anythings in their life or something who made they happiness.
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Suggestion: Refer to they and happiness
Sentence: In conclusion there are a lot of subject interest in university education area for improve our knowledge and character.
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Sentence: Buy cars and easier to take anythings in their life or something who made they happiness.
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No. of Words: 289 350
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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